1. How did i contribute to the group?

I think i contributed really well and played my part well.

2. What could i improve on?

I could improve on looking at the camera when im talking and know my information.

3. Did you give your best effort on this task?

i think i gave a good crack at this task, and i tried really hard to get my bit right.

4. What are some of the things you did really well on this task?

What i did really well on this task was that we had our props ready and organized.

5. If you could do this task over what would you do differently?

I would have a special guest and give them questions that they have to answer about a topic on the news.

6. How do you feel about this piece of work?

I feel proud because we gave our best efforts.

7. What parts of it do you like? Dislike?

I loved all of it, i didn’t dislike anything.

8. What did you enjoy about this piece of work?

I enjoyed the process of making the movie and i like how we introduced the reporters.

9. What were the standards for this piece of work?

Creating a news report

Big idea :White Australian policy

By Indi and James

We Did the White Australian Policy, for our presentation we presented a poster timeline and a prezi. I thought we did okay but could could have spoken a bit louder and maybe shared the talking a bit more. James and I watched Riley and Tom D I thought it could have been more detailed and they didn’t answer there essential question.

Book Title: A long way home

By: Saroo Brielery

Its about a boy called sarroo and he lives in a small town with his family, his 5 years old. He’s brother guddu takes him out in the street one night the go to the train station, guide tells him to wait there why guddu runs of out into the dark. Sarroo is feeling tired is he decides to take a nap. He wakes up an hour later and Guddu is still not back, he panics, sarro thinks that Guddu has hoped on the train. The next morning he was lost but still on the train, he has been traveling for about 15 hours. He hoped of at the very Last station. He was lost.

(That’s all I’ve Read)

My pop comes from Australia, he was born in hawthorn Melbourne. He’s nick name is bill which is short for William, he’s full name is William John White. He is aged 74 and is married to Beverly Kaye White. When he was growing up he wanted to be a plumber and had no pets. When he was a kid he was only child, which means he had no siblings. Pop is now living in Queensland while there house is getting built in Kithbrook, Torquay.

Football

The goalposts are as white as the puffy clouds in the sky. The coaches box is as loud as the roaring crowd in the seats. The frost on the grownd is as icy cold as an icerink.

Movies

When i walk into the cinema, i can see the huge line for the tickets. It was like the crowd at the footy. I carfully walk into the cinama room grab my 3D glasses and take a seat. I can smell the popping popcorn behind me, the lights turn of and i am ready.

Surfing

I was paddling out Juc, it was crisp cold loke a snowman. The waves were as soft as a fluffy teddybear. i got to my takeoff position and sat there. I look at this wave it was a good  one i start paddling for it, i takeoff as the waves whitewash gives me a little bump. The offshore breeze rushes to my face and through my hair i kick out and paddle out again.

Feedback by Daniel:

Indi could of used his time a little bit better and he could of put all of the stories into his own words instead of just copying them down. Indi an alright amount of work but still could of done better and more. he completed three stories but didn’t do similarities and differences.

Goal – improve my supportive evidence

Learning Objective – we are learning to use supportive evidence in our persuasive writing.

Success Criteria – we will be successful when we thoroughly understand how to support our evidence, in persuasive writing.

Title: School should be canceled over 35 degrees.

Bad Example:

I think school should be cancled over 35 degrees because i said so. I get bad grades when i could be surfing. Also my drink bottle warms up and i cant be bothered filling it back up.

Good Example:

Kids can get dehydrated by not drinking enough water. Dehydration can lead to dizzyness or tiredness which will stop kids from concentrating. A lack of concentration will lead to bad grades etc etc.

Similarities:

• None

Differences:

• The Bad example was terrible because it had no supportive evidence and it was just one child’s opinion.
• The Good example was great because not only did it back the arguements up but it did it multiple times.

Need some petrol mate. Yeh mate, diesel please. Load me up, but when he lifted the lid, there was no petrol left. Don’t worry mate we got another can in the shed, ill tell you the directions to the shed first, take a left then a right go straight 15 more metres  then your there, thanks ill be back soon. I eventually got there I opened the door, I walk in its all dark, I turn the light on and there is petrol everywhere I choose the one that said diesel, I went to the door but it didn’t open, and he was never heard from again.

Today hunter and I did our maths workshop, it was on THE POWERS OF TEN. In our workshop we taught 4 kids the powers of ten. Those 4 kids were Ava, Artie, Conall and Billy. In our workshop we played maths pacman and another game.

This week I s doing blogging. I taught Xavier how to get a moving background. He really enjoyed it. also Jarrod taught me how to get glitter writing which im using right now.